General Writing ThoughtsPosted by Mark C. King 2016-06-03 03:35PM
The thought of deviating from an outline has been on my mind.
First, in my debut book, Sigmund Shaw: A Steampunk Adventure
, I had originally had the main character work with a girl who had become an orphan. Sigmund would have been like a father figure to her. However, Sigmund already had that role with his niece, so I decided to remove the relationship with this orphan. No problems so far... However, that orphan girl was to balance the story with a female lead character. When I took her out, I forgot to replace that role. Result: the lack of a regular female character is something that many have pointed out as something missing! Lesson learned. The second book, Whispers of Bedlam Asylum
, has a very prominent female character. :)
I also bring up deviation because my current work in progress is causing me to deviate in a different way. Although I am still following my outline, I find that I am adding several chapters to flush out some situations and emotions than I had anticipated. I am not at all unhappy with the results, but I do worry that when I go back to edit that the flow might wander a bit with the unintended stuff.
No way to be sure until I'm done with the first draft. :) Guess I should get back to it.
General Writing ThoughtsPosted by Mark C. King 2016-05-24 07:51PM
As I have mentioned in previous posts, I know very little about advertising or marketing. That said, I will continue to share things I'm trying and the results I get. Perhaps this will help guide someone in what they should or should not try.
I am using Amazon's Kindle Direct Publishing (KDP) for my book. Say whatever you want about Amazon, good or bad, but this service has been extremely helpful for me. One of the things it offers is to put your book on special or on sale. I decided to give this a try with my first novel, Sigmund Shaw: A Steampunk Adventure. You get to have the sale for a total of 5 days during each KDP period (3 months or so).
I decided to offer my book for free as I am still very much in the phase of getting my book read by as many people as possible. I think it was a good choice. In the 5 days of the special, 145 people downloaded a free copy. To put this in some context: in the year or so that my book has been available, I have sold around 40 copies. 1 Year, 40 copies. 5 days, 145 copies. Yep, very glad I gave this a shot!
I have already scheduled a free special for my second book, Whispers of Bedlam Asylum, and am curious how that will go (starting June 10th).
Another thing I am in the middle of trying is a goodreads giveaway. If you don't know goodreads.com, then stop reading this article and go there now. Every author should be familiar with this wonderful site!
Goodreads is just starting to experiment with ebook giveaways, but the normal for them is for an actual hard-copy giveaway. Being that I have access to hard-copies of my book, I thought I would give it a try. The giveaway is free (you do have to provide the book or books and the shipping of the book to the winner or winners). To keep it reasonably priced, I decided to give out 3 copies.
Today is day 2 of the giveaway and 150 people have already entered. Over a hundred of those was on day 1. The giveaway goes for around 30 days, so the end number should be interesting.
If your goal is to get your work read, then I highly recommend these two avenues.
Side note: Coleen Hoover is the first self-published author to reach the New York Times Best Seller list for an ebook. I read some of her interviews to see how she went about getting her work known and, among other things, she had done these two exact giveaways!. Not saying that I (or you) will have her kind of success, but it does not hurt to try! :)
General Writing ThoughtsPosted by Mark C. King 2016-05-20 03:09PM
So I received my first bad review from a reader. It was inevitable, you can't please all the people all the time.
How to handle this is the next question. I don't pretend to be an expert, but I'll tell you what I went through.
First, I was super disappointed. I want my book to be loved by everyone, everywhere. Not realistic, of course, but why not aim high. Okay, so my work is not beloved by all. Back to being disappointed. It is amazing what you can go through in a matter of minutes. I questioned whether or not I should even consider continuing writing. I questioned the competency of the reviewer. I felt miserable, angry, tired, exasperated... you get the point.
After a few minutes, I started to realize that this is normal. Even better than that, I realized that the reviewer had made some very helpful points. This is not always the case with criticism, but when it is specific, it can be used to your advantage.
Example: You stink! (not all that helpful)
Example: You stink at spelling (something specific, much more helpful)
The reviewer talked about certain word choices, mistakes, and so forth. Despite my wanting it to not be true, they were exactly right. Breathe.
I listened to the suggestions and was able to incorporate them in a revision of the book (this may not always be possible, but it was in my case). Because of this bad review, I think my book just got better!
Again, this is due to the specific, therefore helpful, feedback (still negative) that the reviewer gave.
I went from being kind of angry and disappointed to actually being thankful.
Will I always handle bad reviews like this? No idea. I certainly hope I can continue to see the help in what is provided.
General Writing ThoughtsPosted by Mark C. King 2016-05-16 02:27PM
There are times when I really feel like writing. There are times when I feel like writing and feel particularly creative - those times are awesome!
There are many times, however, when i don't feel all that creative nor feel too inspired to write. This doesn't appear to be something unique to me, which is nice to know that at least I'm not alone.
But what should you do when you feel this way? I can't speak for everyone, but my answer is to keep writing. Maybe you don't write a lot. Maybe you don't write anything that is particularly good. But you keep the process going. Writing becomes a habit.
The thing to remember is that you are going to edit your work before it is released to anyone to read. So even if you end up writing some poor stuff, that is okay - you'll fix it later.
The important thing to do is keep going. One regret I have was when I stopped jogging. It took awhile to get into a groove, but once I was there, I actually enjoyed it. After a running event (which was the reason I started jogging) I took some days off. Then I took some more. Before long, running was a chore again. If only I didn't take those days off!
Writing is not exactly the same, but I firmly believe that consistency will help you to keep going. Creating a novel is not an easy thing and takes time. Don't make it even harder on yourself by taking long breaks from writing.
Remember, good or bad, taking time to write is an accomplishment!
General Writing ThoughtsPosted by Mark C. King 2016-05-09 02:52PM
I attended my first writing workshop (at the Watch City Steampunk Festival) and found it to be very enjoyable.
I really didn't know what it would be like and wondered if there would be a way to leave if I didn't like it. A few minutes in and I was sure that I wouldn't be leaving early.
Why was it beneficial for me? A few reasons. First, it was very nice to hear other writers having the same experiences that I have had. Made me feel that I was not alone in my struggles.
Second, I enjoyed a little brainstorming session we held. Ideas were bounced around and it was great to see different perspectives on a single topic. Quite an interesting premise came out of that session...
Third, it was nice to make some more contacts. I did not go into this workshop with the notion to let anyone know that I had published a couple books - and certainly no intention to try and sell. Being that the group was small, we did introductions (including our writing history), so my 'secret' was out. When the session was over I talked with a few others and we exchanged emails. Also, if anyone was interested in reading what I had done, I offered to send them free digital copies.
All in all, if was fun and kept my interest in writing steampunk at a high level.
General Writing ThoughtsPosted by Mark C. King 2016-04-29 09:51AM
One of the general requirements of writing is research. When talking about places, landscapes, buildings, and so forth, you want your reader to feel like they are there. the only way to do that is for you, the author, to have that same feeling.
If you are writing about a modern day house, that probably is not too hard to imagine. But what if you are writing about a place that you have never been? Perhaps your protagonist lives in a castle, or they are travelling to a country that you have never been to? How do you make these locations real?
The answer is research. My current story takes place in Egypt, just outside of Giza. In addition, it takes place over a hundred years ago. Being that I have never been to Egypt, and will never be there a hundred years ago, I needed to do a lot of research to get a feel for the area. Much of my digging revolved around old photographs and paintings. Paintings have an advantage as they are in color, whereas photos of the time were in black and white. I spent hours going through images, reading websites, and so forth. Interestingly, those hours have amounted to about two paragraphs in my current work. That might seem like a small payoff, but to set the scene is, to help transport the reader to that time and place is something I value greatly.
Another tool that is very helpful is Google maps. Maps in general show you where things are (obviously) but I got a new appreciation for the area by using Streetview. My first book was set in London (another place I haven't been) and I took a kind of virtual tour via using streetview. I 'walked' around London, the Thames, alleys, all the places that made up locations for my story. It is not a substitute for actually being there, but it was incredibly helpful.
There are many other reasons for research, but I thought I would take a few minutes and share what I have been doing currently and how it has helped me.
General Writing ThoughtsPosted by Mark C. King 2016-03-25 07:09PM
I read somewhere that an author's friends should never have to buy one their books. I completely agree with this.
As a new author, you may think, "I need all the sales I can get." But that is quite short-sited. You are not going to get rich off of your friends. Your main concern is getting your book known.
So be generous with your book. I give mine away to anyone that asks (friend or stranger). Be happy that people are interested in your work.